Reflection on Peer Review

I found this peer review to be the most helpful. The comments made on my paper helped me immensely in creating more of a flow to the piece. It let me see where I could add in more description and helped me improve on showing the story rather than just telling it. It also showed me points where I contradicted myself and that may have been unclear to the reader and helped me fix those parts. I actually did not have any problems or issues with this peer review, all the advice I got was positive and really helped. My paper has overall been improved drastically. I feel that I cover most parts of the narrative fairly well. The reflection was the best I have had yet. I believe I have improved upon my paper to the best of my abilities, and that the peer review was a good processes this time.